Saturday, 22 March 2014

Enshrouded Love....

                          Five Sentence Fiction...." Ruins "

Circumstance simply pulled them apart ignoring their every single plea .
Dejected dismayed they tried too hard to continue life’s journey .

Still a concealed desire lay deep down somewhere in their minds preserved from the view of this judgmental world where they resided as complete strangers again .

When fate dragged them together once more into an unplanned outing to a historical fort with their friends.
Their eyes met and that hidden desire kindled hope unwrapping their enshrouded love even amidst those old rugged ruins .


                                                 

17 comments:

  1. Well done, I loved the flow of this one

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  2. Love triumphs even amidst ruins! :)
    Nice Sushree :)

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    1. Honest feelings do find a way someday ....Thank you :)

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  3. Beautiful lines, loved the third sentence :)

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    1. Thank you...glad you loved that one :)

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  4. Interesting tale of finding old love among old ruins....nice!

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    1. Thanks a lot...n ya an interesting line :)

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  5. oh good lord, concealed desires finally resurface :D

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    1. Ya they did somehow :) Thank you ....

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  6. It needed the ruins to bring back their love that was sliding towards ruin.

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  7. Very nicely written.
    http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2014/03/ruins.html

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Do scribble down few words ...it motivates :)

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