Thursday, 21 May 2015

Wheels



The wheels moved, I couldn’t. 
Something had stiffened my whole body, still I could hear them speak, in a language unknown. Footsteps approached me, pacing up my heart beat and making me sweat all over. 

A thousand thoughts popped up in my mind imagining every possible outcome for my body that was probably going to thrown out of the train like an unwanted fetus denied any chance of survival.  

The moving wheels seemed to invite the inevitable for me when, mom she just switched on the light compelling me to start a new day again, far from the world of  dreams.





                            



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15 comments:

  1. The wheel of time is a great reminder of the extraordinary and upset, yet rekindle hope. Superb:)

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    1. Yes it's indeed is a great reminder :) Thank you

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  2. Choice of words very powerful... Great FSF :)

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    1. Really ! Thank you for your kind words :)

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  3. Haha, didn't see that coming.. Good one :)

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    1. Thank you :) Happy to know you enjoyed

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  4. That's well written.. powerful in fact!

    Cheers

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  5. With wheels there always is a memory or dreams associated with it.

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  6. The threat from the dream thankfully been interrupted my Mom! Nicely described ☺

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  7. The threat from the dream thankfully been interrupted my Mom! Nicely described ☺

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  8. The threat from the dream thankfully been interrupted my Mom! Nicely described ☺

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