Sunday, 6 April 2014

Faith....



                                  
                                       




A whimsical step by my father pushed us into the dark lanes of extreme poverty .
Surrendering our lives into the clutches of fate that seemed to have seized us in it’s fist .
 
Those days of hardships made me feel , as if it was a trap for the lifetime .

The starved faces of my family coerced me to agree to every disagreeable proposal even though it demanded me to sell my body .

And just then she appeared , my old headmistress , an unexpected visitor inside our dingy single room , offering me a job at my school and restoring my faith on humanity .


                                        




A 100 words ( Write Tribe's 100 words on Saturday 2014 # 10 ) Five Sentence Fiction with prompt " Whimsical " and Blog Adda's WOW prompt  "It was a trap" .

 As today's a holiday for A-Z Challenge's participants so linking it up with Ultimate Blog Challenge
                                                

19 comments:

  1. Lovely post Sushree. But only if the Headmistress would have come a bit earlier.

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    1. Thank you....sometimes God sends the savior just before the end moment...

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  2. Thanks to the kind headmistress,the young woman's misery ends.A nice short fiction

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  3. I love that quote! And wow what a great thought! WE really shouldn't give up on people...they will come through! Great post!

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  4. I love the great ending, Sushree :) Lovely story with so many prompts :)

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  5. this is great sushree :) as always u r a pro at combining prompts :D

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  6. Wow. Nice one. You have great command over description. :)

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  7. O my...what a sad post but thankfully with a positive ending. Nice the way you have combined the prompts!

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  8. Thank God for sending an angel in her life! Loved that quote! :)

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  9. Some visitors turn out to change lives! nicely done :)

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  10. Three prompts in one, nice blend,and a thoughtful piece, Sushree !

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  11. Very nice! You could use this idea as the basis for a longer story, too!

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  12. That was nice Sushree. Very beautifully woven

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  13. Beautifully connected prompts with a lovely story, I have also joined two prompts here ,I am now follwing your blog

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  14. Thank god the headmistress came in time as a good Samaritan.

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Do scribble down few words ...it motivates :)