Sunday, 2 March 2014

Twenty Years....

                                                        

He had walked out for reasons unknown .
Those years of growing up was flavored with the love of a single parent.
She never inquired but an unanswered question dwelt deep in the confines of her mind .

Today ,  lying down on the hospital bed , her memories traversed back to those days of togetherness .
How desperately she wished  him to be with her today .

“ Ma’m …You got a visitor “.

She turned her head slowly , awaiting for her visitor to come along .

Her eyes met His .

A fragile curve adorned her lips filling up the gloom of Twenty  years .

                                        
                                                       

30 comments:

  1. A happy end and a welcome reunion with dad

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  2. That was sweet happy story. Dad came in right when she needed him most.

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  3. Reunions always make me fuzzy and warm. Glad she got to meet him finally. Wonder why he left in in the first place, though?

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    1. I am glad that you liked it :) n sorry for not changing the setting as u commented the previous time also . But I have done it now .
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    1. Oh...Thanks :) It feels awesome when someone likes our post :)

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  6. A smile is a curve that sets many things straight :) Simple but lovely take on the prompt. A reunion has to be happy, always :)

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    1. Sometimes a curve makes things straight .... Thank you :)

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  7. That left me with a warm smile on my face...sweet sweet story! :)

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    1. Thank you so much ...Kajal ...I am glad that it touched you :)

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  8. Such a cute story. I really enjoyed reading this father/daughter 'milap'.

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    1. Thanks a lot ma'm :) I feel happy that you enjoyed the write up....

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  9. this was really sweet.. love a happy ending :D

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    1. Thank you so much :) I always feel whatever in between the endings ought to be happy ...I love it that way too :)

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  10. Better late than never. That's a cute story :)

    (Happy to find another dentist here!)

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    1. Thank you for liking the story :) ...So , are you a dentist....

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  11. Love the happy ending. Beautiful story, doc:)

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    1. Thank a lot...Vishal :) Glad that you loved it ...

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  12. Seems like she wanted this reunion. I hope it turns out the way she has dreamed. :)

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  13. I too hope it turns out that way Carrie....Thank you :)

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  14. Happy endings! Who doesnt love them? :)

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    1. Oh..Thank you ....I wish everyone's life gets filled up with happy endings :)

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  15. Thanks a lot...Richa for the cute comment :)

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  16. The pain, the pangs of separation is brought out beautifully.

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